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Almighty Dolla (Opposite Ends Of The Spectrum)

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Almighty Dolla (Opposite Ends Of The Spectrum)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 6th, '10, 11:15

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ADdS5tuhBjA

Daddy's money in a heap on the dresser
Mommy's...cocaine in a bag hidden...beneath my sweater
This couch is leather, I'm thinking of trading it in
It needs custom upholstery like the one in the den
This cup of gin is just the...breakfast I need
To rich kids it's like wheeties...or Gatorade geez
It's 8 till 3, about now, time my...day started
Uncap the needle...my vein's the main target
Hop in the car...wave to Mama and Papa
The is is the life that I live thanks to the almighty dolla

Some kids hands in a heap in the dirt
He tried...taking a diamond...ya'think that he woulda learnt
My skin's burnt...the sun's beating...set ablaze
While I fish for diamonds, sweats beading off my face
There's a feeling of disgrace, when I can't sleep in this hut
And the guy with the machete's already dreamin' and such
I wake up...I hear the screams and the yells
Some kid had tried running now his lungs were impaled
The blood spills...I just stare at it's colors
The is is the life that I live thanks to the almighty dolla
Your brain is child's play to manipulate.
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Re: Almighty Dolla (Opposite Ends Of The Spectrum)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 6th, '10, 11:36

lol yeah you were right this ones way better great concept and nice flow. that second line throw off a bit but I'm sure in audio it would work. Great drop bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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