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Postby gutawafang » Aug 5th, '10, 03:01

can't you see, can't you see? the only one that I can be
is the one that you can see, with a mask that I can't leave
behind because I wanna be, this way forever, this is me
this is me with my spirit and my soul I promise this
will be me, only me, with my heart, my mind too
I'll be me, you'll be mine no matter what, I'd find you
I'll be there behind you, next time I'll just bind you
maybe then I can finally breathe so I'd be fine too
have you ever tried to be alive when you're fucking killed
with nobody else but you survived, how you fucking chilled
how you even manage to breathe, it's such a pain to be
even looking at this world, or maybe it's mainly me
this fucking pain in me, I'm fucking vain to see
the aspects of life, I wanna die, in fact I'd rather die
I'm sure you've lied that you lied to cover your other lies
that's why I'm sighing as I try telling another lie
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Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '10, 14:46

Rather angry, now are we? I enjoyed reading it, though since you've done so many pieces that are pretty much like this maybe you should focus on concepts and become more versatile as a writer. I'd like to see the storiesa my man Fishy could come up with.
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Postby gutawafang » Aug 10th, '10, 01:22

thank you very much Solace. I'll take your advice man. :y:
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