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Unfinshed W Block

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Unfinshed W Block

Postby Just Silver » Aug 9th, '10, 00:11

Five sprays through a driveway
Picture my Mind "frame"
Scissors held sideways
Paper art crime wave
Everyday 13th of Friday
Serve them courtly my way
..So I say, I got artistic integrity
Parts missng from enemies
Fuck their art their pen is teeth
Fake writers biting with dentures
Double the fake might as well stay at the benches
Ive made the invention of an interventions intention
To snipe a sentence and sentence remembrance




HAd writers block bad so i cant finish it
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Re: Unfinshed W Block

Postby Just Silver » Aug 16th, '10, 08:15

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Re: Unfinshed W Block

Postby Just Silver » Aug 17th, '10, 05:38

Geno wrote:Does it even have a meaning? Maybe I'm not picking it up because it's unfinished. Seems like you just tried to fill it with multies. And it flowed pretty good, the bars seem a little short though, but it's probably just 'cause that's how you structured it. :tounge2:

didnt have a meaning yet lol

I work on a concept while writing
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