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Re: Day 5

Postby mcZu » Aug 17th, '10, 19:15

as to not look so fucking pretentious..
I don't wanna mention it but really
you're pretending it's ideally


For some reason those lines stood out to me. Good verse. Your 'Day' pieces seem to become more interesting with the day. Good work.
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