The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

What's your fav form of lyricism?

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Which of these is better to have?

Punchlines
2
14%
Metaphors
1
7%
Similes
0
No votes
Multi's
8
57%
Wordplay
3
21%
Other?
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 14

What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby Xray » Aug 9th, '10, 09:41

I know all should be required to be ill. But this is not about that. It's about what you think delivers more, lyricism wise. I personally think Multi's is for flow, if it wasn't for flow, I'd hate the shit out of it, just because how many people use it. It's mad played out.

I probably like wordplay best, if not, punches.

I didn't know where else to make this thread, if this is the wrong section, my bad. You can move it if you want.
Image
Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


New Track: The Nightmare
User avatar
Xray
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9920
Joined: Feb 21st, '07, 04:37
Location: Australia
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 9th, '10, 10:06

I dig them metas :smoking:
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby TommiTMX » Aug 9th, '10, 10:48

I went for Multi's because of how much they can change a flow to be a lot more interesting :happy:

I do like some good Wordplay and Metaphors too though, but a nice flow is what captivates me.
Socrates wrote:True knowledge exists in knowing that you know nothing.


Mars wrote:Ay Yo I'm tired of hip hop being about the same lame things, We are what we make it, and I ain't here for friends, Half of yall yell gangsta! Most of yall pretend... ,Sex sells, aids spread, money talks, people shot, Decade and a half and we still ain't, learned from Tupac!
User avatar
TommiTMX
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 379
Joined: Feb 20th, '09, 01:36

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby Solace » Aug 9th, '10, 17:01

Multies and Punchlines
Image
User avatar
Solace
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 19901
Joined: Apr 25th, '08, 03:12
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 9th, '10, 20:24

wordplay and others...
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby classthe_king » Aug 9th, '10, 20:25

Solace wrote:Multies and Punchlines


But if I had to chose one I'd say punchlines.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
User avatar
classthe_king
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 14163
Joined: Feb 12th, '09, 02:30
Location: Ohio
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 9th, '10, 23:05

SiiNiDE wrote: something meaningful,


couldn't have said it better myself :worship:
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 19th, '10, 10:24

SiiNiDE wrote:Actual lyricism. Multies and flow don't make a lyricist, in my opinion. There are many lyricists in different genres that would put most hip hop artists to shame with how deep and poetic they write. Lyricism stems from what you say, not the pattern in which you rhymed it. That's rap. So to me, my favorite part of an artist is their ability to say something meaningful, not their ability to compare their status to any number of different objects.


yep i agree :y: well said
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby ChinaShopTaurus » Aug 19th, '10, 15:32

lmao

Punchlines = wordplay/similes/metaphors

you forgot vocab and complexity

flow has nothing to do with lyricism
"If I sign something for you, and I see it on Ebay,
when you go home, I'm gonna be under your Bed"
ChinaShopTaurus
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 104
Joined: Aug 12th, '10, 13:13

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby ChinaShopTaurus » Aug 19th, '10, 20:41

Name a punchline that doesn't incorporate one of those.
"If I sign something for you, and I see it on Ebay,
when you go home, I'm gonna be under your Bed"
ChinaShopTaurus
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 104
Joined: Aug 12th, '10, 13:13

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby ChinaShopTaurus » Aug 19th, '10, 20:56

SiiNiDE wrote:
ChinaShopTaurus wrote:Name a punchline that doesn't incorporate one of those.


Warbux: "Can you even hear the fucking percussion?" - A Punchline in a battle of his which is talking about a guy being off beat. No wordplay or metaphores or similies.

spoonfull: "You're liking men and you can't even deny it kid, looking like cire's twin carved outta vagina skin" in his battle agains Kobra Ky. No metas/similies/wordplays... Direct punches are very effective and usually stem from personals.

Those are just 2 examples off the top of my head, out of many.


Warbux is sick.

Here is where opinion differs. I personally don't call those punchlines.
"If I sign something for you, and I see it on Ebay,
when you go home, I'm gonna be under your Bed"
ChinaShopTaurus
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 104
Joined: Aug 12th, '10, 13:13

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby mcZu » Aug 19th, '10, 21:03

SiiNiDE wrote:
ChinaShopTaurus wrote:Name a punchline that doesn't incorporate one of those.


Warbux: "Can you even hear the fucking percussion?" - A Punchline in a battle of his which is talking about a guy being off beat. No wordplay or metaphores or similies.

spoonfull: "You're liking men and you can't even deny it kid, looking like cire's twin carved outta vagina skin" in his battle agains Kobra Ky. No metas/similies/wordplays... Direct punches are very effective and usually stem from personals.

Those are just 2 examples off the top of my head, out of many.

He did use a simile in both cases. In the second one it was obvious, 'cause he used like. And in the first one he compared two unlike things, ''hear'' and ''percussion''. A simile doesn't always include ''like'', ''as'' or ''than''. However, you could argue that the first one isn't a simile. People have been arguing about similes that don't include ''like'', ''as'' and ''then'' over the past few decades..

Personally, I agree with ChinaShopTaurus. I also want to highlight something ChinaShopTaurus added about the flow being not a part of lyricism... I couldn't agree more. You can't give feedback on the flow when you read a verse, unless you have the beat the writer used to write to. And, still, you would have a hard time figuring out his/her flow.
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male

Re: What's your fav form of lyricism?

Postby classthe_king » Aug 19th, '10, 22:36

A punchline is anything dissing someone else or making yourself seem better.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
User avatar
classthe_king
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 14163
Joined: Feb 12th, '09, 02:30
Location: Ohio
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users