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Postby Just Silver » Aug 20th, '10, 17:53

whats a bump to me ill give some hints
Its the biggest hit since kids were dissed
Since its missed you type four letters
Try and score better the way of the game
Say it the same its all luck for views
Im stuck with views and no news
Fuck it ill show you,keep writing slash type
Beat the mic and excite mass rights
Thats right we need advice and praise
I could write for days I would blow up like Michael Bay
Let me guess too lazy to read
Making em plead
But hey its just me, when i say its unseen
Today i will fiend for support from my team
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Re: Bump

Postby neversnooze » Aug 20th, '10, 18:38

i was reading this as a freestyle and it was dope, not bad! :smoking:
Sometimes I stay up so late that I have my morning coffee before I go to bed
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Re: Bump

Postby Just Silver » Aug 20th, '10, 18:47

neversnooze wrote:i was reading this as a freestyle and it was dope, not bad! :smoking:

thanks exactly what it was
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Re: Bump

Postby Just Silver » Aug 21st, '10, 06:12

SiiNiDE wrote:It's amazing how much trash people talk about my style while others attempt to replicate it and fail miserably. I'm flattered, though.

No offense to you. As I said, I'm flattered. Keep elevating.

I don't know what your talking about but lets leave it at that
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