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Drowning in Darkness

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Drowning in Darkness

Postby mcZu » Aug 16th, '10, 01:16

Looking at life and all its interferences
A simple inference interfering since
That day just hit me and it all became clear
Around the same time joy became fear
Stuck in the same lane.. here
Tears coming out my eyes.. Phelps
If I brag, does that mean I doubt myself?
Or is it just an omen, I fear her..
A diamond that looks like that, dirt
Getting back with you is like fixing a broken mirror..
It’s best to leave it alone or you’ll get hurt
A broken heart can fuck with your health..
You’re so empty, yet so full of yourself
Poor whelp.. It’s mind over matter
I really don’t mind and you really don’t matter
I had to ask her, how it felt to cheat
Was it like, you just felt to cheat..

Or did you fell on a sheet while dude was lying over you?
They say why cry over them if they’re not crying over you
But you are crying over me.. should I cry over you?
Nah.. why, cry? I’m already over you..

..Do not grieve if you lose something
It’ll come back to you in a different form
It differs in form.. a different norm
Turn your back to the place where ignorance is born
Ignore the ignorant, I won’t, I shan’t..
If you don’t know what you want
You’ll just end up with things you don’t want
Saying you don’t know who you want
You have issues that misuse your brain
Sending I miss-you’s without your name
Like I don’t know your sister’s number..
It’s a deep wound, not a blister under
A veil of bliss, it’s richer in terms of
Missing your kiss, this is a sound similar to hiss
Disabling the psychical attraction, it fits..
A cynical traction of misfits
While the chemical reaction shifts..
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby gutawafang » Aug 16th, '10, 03:02

Wow. I don't know what to say.

After reading the first verse, I can't go on anymore... :(
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby mcZu » Aug 16th, '10, 05:18

^Thanks for taking the time to read it, appreciate it.
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby mart85 » Aug 16th, '10, 05:56

McMaybe wrote:That was pretty great man. Really poetic, very well written. Really, beautiful stuff. :y:


my thoughts exactly, sounded real nice :y: I especially liked the last part of the second verse, nice lyrics
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby mcZu » Aug 16th, '10, 06:05

McMaybe wrote:That was pretty great man. Really poetic, very well written. Really, beautiful stuff. :y:

Thanks, Maybe. Appreciate it.

mart85 wrote:
McMaybe wrote:That was pretty great man. Really poetic, very well written. Really, beautiful stuff. :y:


my thoughts exactly, sounded real nice :y: I especially liked the last part of the second verse, nice lyrics

Thanks, Mart. Appreciate it. I couldn't have done it without your beat.
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby mcZu » Aug 16th, '10, 06:16

^Thanks for the feed, Geno. Appreciate it. And consider it done.
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby mcZu » Aug 17th, '10, 18:50

^Thanks for taking the time to feed it, SiiNiDE. Appreciate it. And non taking, haha.
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Re: Drowning in Darkness

Postby mcZu » Aug 22nd, '10, 23:03

Bumpizzy.
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