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Alone Somewhere

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Alone Somewhere

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 24th, '10, 01:38

my dna is Morphing me into a soldier of Fortune
but that doesn't matter cuz I don't even feel Important

I'm where I've always been but tonight it seems Foreign
if I'm really so mentally ill, honestly I should be Quaran-

tined, alone somewhere in solitary Confinement
so I can waste away and wonder where my Mind Went

what's the Prognosis of my Psychosis I Know It isn't Good
if you can't take it all in then you'll be the one Took

as your Caught Up in scenario that you never Thought Of
you feel like Sawdust in a hurricane raining down Lava

do Not Trust this world it has already Forgot Ya
I found that out the same day that I Lost Love

I'm Barely Here, what will become of me isn't Very Clear
you'll never make the part of me that Cares Appear

those elements are combustible don't Supply the Spark
I know it's gonna rain the Skies are Dark Inside my Heart
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Aug 24th, '10, 05:12, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Alone Somehwhere

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 24th, '10, 02:02

Havn't seen you drop in a longg time but this was dope man! As usual, you still know how to knock 'em out of the park. Good stuff bro, keep it up!
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Re: Alone Somewhere

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 24th, '10, 05:13

thanks guys I'll be dropping more than ever and throwing in some feedback cuz I'm all about the rhymes
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Re: Alone Somewhere

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 24th, '10, 09:58

very good lyrics, stay active...i'm bout to be back for good and bigger than ever!


hope to do a collab in the future with you
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Alone Somewhere

Postby Weather Man » Aug 25th, '10, 06:19

Has a nice ending to it but I think this little part here do:

Not Trust this world it has already Forgot Ya
I found that out the same day that I Lost Love


Where it says "Forgot Ya" should probably be changed to "Forgotten ya" but that's my opinion over all nice work, good flow, metaphors where great, and well put together ...
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