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Re: Supposed To Be Cool (comedy song)

Postby Weather Man » Aug 23rd, '10, 06:39

Really good, better then my work, nice flow, good chorus & really enjoyed it... 5/5 :b:
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Re: Supposed To Be Cool (comedy song)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 23rd, '10, 20:58

Hahaha was hilarious man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Supposed To Be Cool (comedy song)

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 23rd, '10, 21:05

Nice.
Reminds me a lot of Brain Damage.
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: Supposed To Be Cool (comedy song)

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 24th, '10, 05:16

I was gettin' less love then a Foster Kid... my favorite line

good work here very creative
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Re: Supposed To Be Cool (comedy song)

Postby Solace » Aug 25th, '10, 01:21

For just fucking around that was pretty decent man. Not too superb but, a couple minutes and a West beat and you come out with that is pretty great.
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Re: Supposed To Be Cool (comedy song)

Postby Robbie G » Aug 26th, '10, 03:29

That was great. It was pretty simple but it had decent rhymes and was funny.
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