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Stacking Ammo

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Stacking Ammo

Postby Just Silver » Aug 26th, '10, 23:13

Trying to make the game with loads to save
Be over paid and have pockets overweight
Obese from street beats then overtake
Flow so hard that the rows will break,so wait
Give them a dose and taste of the road to fame
But yo just wait im announcing this tape
Have you surrounded in tape for sounding so fake
You could drown from the weight of my flow on the tape
Put a hole in ya face supposing your great
Smokin the grape but you.. fakin stayin to raisins
Dried up aprons not eatin at all
Put three in your jaw its my season to ball
For no reason at all Im keeping it raw
Just to weaken the law im decent you fall
I leave you in awe you cant believe what you saw
I rip beats like ripleys unbelievable
I rip these so quickly im gonna need it dope
If i don't have that under mes a rope
Im ready to climb have a machete in mind
Get the levees and nines I flow dead or alive
You have now regretted the time I vendetta'd a line
Trend setter design I send the better declined
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Re: Stacking Ammo

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 28th, '10, 18:57

Damn man I really dig the simpleness of every peice you do, the short lines are great to help with the flow. Multis are always good man idk why people are always sleepin on your shit. We should collab soon, havent been writing much lately but hit me up sometime :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Stacking Ammo

Postby Just Silver » Aug 28th, '10, 19:12

Yah-hah wrote:Damn man I really dig the simpleness of every peice you do, the short lines are great to help with the flow. Multis are always good man idk why people are always sleepin on your shit. We should collab soon, havent been writing much lately but hit me up sometime :y:

Thanks this was a rough draft of a track/ verse that might get used or not

But i will definitely hit u up when im up for it
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