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I FUCKED UP SO HERE IT IS (Disss)

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I FUCKED UP SO HERE IT IS (Disss)

Postby J Roc » Aug 31st, '10, 06:12

iiiight so i wrote a disss to someone thinking it was a multie acccount and found out it wasn't the same person sooon as i was done so i pretty much juss dissed someone in my crew on some friendly fire shit lol. Immma post it here so its not a waste of my time

Rhymes are Capped , Structured Fucked but i did the best i could on fixing it sorrrry.

dude im disssin : Pulse (Thinking it was Swift Keys ). I'm rain.

Title : Are u CuhRazy?!?! Disss

It's Time to PAR-TAY, ARENT IT? He Wouldn't Partake Unless the BAR DRANK ORANGES/
Even on this WEBSITE no HARD GANGS WANT U IN.....
Cuz u Wouldn't Pick 'WEST SIDE' in a KANYE ARGUMENT... !!!!/
So imma Wait till MR. TOUGH BITCHES UP Without a CHICK TO TOUCH
Cuz Even If She BURNED WEED she'll only "JERK KEY" Cuz He'd Get "HIT, & RUN" !!!! (Jerkey)/
Ur the HIGH-LOW SORT and u told me u LIKE THOSE WHORES
but Since Ur G's HARD imma pull 'KEY CARD' To See Whuts 'BeHIND CLOSED DOORS' /
im 'Cold-Blooded' as a DINOSAUR And My JOKES ARE JUST PAINFUL
Plus im OPEN TO ANAL so I Stare At ur SLUT's ASS cus i 'HUMP BACKS' Like a OCEAN OF WHALES
So When the THREE BLOW 'KEY LOW' Like COKE ON DA SCALE or SNORTING A RAIL (Kilo) !!!!/
My Raps Hot, like i SPIT WITH HEATERS While u barely got SPITTIN FEVER
So to HIDE THE FACT he aint FIT FOR LEADER he LIES & RAPS for SIXTY WEEKS FIRST
And RE-WRITES SLOW
Just cus he says its 'KEY's STYLE' Dont Mean He Meant He was 'SWIFT' WITH ETHER !!!!(keystyle)/
i CHECKED & RESEARCHED Hoodrich BACK TO BACK
Their a 'PACK A STANS' Like their MIDDLE EASTERN !!!!(Packistan)/
Lets Act CIVIL PEOPLE He Acts Like a CROOK & LIES
So i TOOK HIS MIND, lets have a 'LOOOK INSIDE' Like a WINDOW CLEANER !!!!/
Pulse : "Imma Let Rainy TOY WITH MY MIND,
Im Working At My Job, He Wants That TOILET TO SHINE
And i just Dissed Rain Cuz i AVOIDED HIS LINES
But He Didn't DISS ME TOO And he's in SWIFTY's CREW... so Where Does My LOYALTY LIE???"

(He's Pulse & Swift .. He said i didnt mention him in the crew diss i made so im getting a "pass" , so I Said "I Dissed ur crew Whut Happen to 1 For all All for 1" So he Dissed me lol)


u can telll by the last rhyme scheme i fucked up lollllll. Lightwork
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Re: I FUCKED UP SO HERE IT IS (Disss)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 31st, '10, 21:30

:worship: Good punches dude Kanye line was funny. wat site is this on?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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