MULTI-OVERDOSE (RAWWW!)

[bullet_boy46]

working on multis, j-roc shouty, my multi hero....(someones gonna call me a dick rider) here we go!

just let the incredible feed on you edible breeds
ill knock you off of that pedestal with impeccable speed
removed your left testicle and "vegetable seeds"
now im wanted for negligence of your medical needs
intelligence bleeds though my telekinetical frees
leave em "disconnected" from the style we "birthed"
with "maimed umbilical cords for their reigns greed"
to confrontation and back i lead em
and when their populations attack, i bleed em
until they make "no (cents)" like operation iraqi freedom
it was a lesson respectable
yet im haunted by the voices of dead intellectuals
destined to vex their souls in a quest to the depths of poles
i drew my sword and severed their chest and intestinals
with the rest of their flesh extolled, the clandestined were spectacles
now their impressive association no longer stands
like the excessive exfoliation of promised lands
as digressive as holy nations of honor expands

[bullet_boy46]

no feed


bump

[classthe_king]

This was horrible

[Solace]

Yup! Here we go! Time for me to be a total dick and discredit you.

just let the incredible feed on you edible breeds

You're being so vague. That doesn't make any sense. We're being digested by the best? Ohh man. Amazing work!

intelligence bleeds though my telekinetical frees

Never heard of telekinetic free. What the fuck is that?

leave em "disconnected" from the style we "birthed"
with "maimed umbilical cords for their reigns greed"

Lol...What are you even saying?

yet im haunted by the voices of dead intellectuals

Smart dead people are talking to you? Is that what this line means? What's the point of that...

destined to vex their souls in a quest to the depths of poles

The depths of poles? Really? You don't even know what you're writing.

like the excessive exfoliation of promised lands
as digressive as holy nations of honor expands

If by "RAWWWWW!!!!" you mean "PSEUDO-INTELLECTUAL!!!!", then yeah this is amazingly raw.

[bullet_boy46]

...first answer is "ehh, tried to multi it to hard"

...second "telikinetical is a physic power of physical property, or brain"

...third "lol, you dont get it? disconnected, birthed, maimed umbilical cord? maimed= cut, disconnected..u know that..at birth they cut that cord off, "

fourth...."im trying to say im so smart intellectuals haunt me"

fifth..."i admit i never really heard about it, but i think someone said something bout physcics?"

sixth..."once again tried to multi hard"

thats it

[Solace]

...first answer is "ehh, tried to multi it to hard"

Lol

...second "telikinetical is a physic power of physical property, or brain"

Yeah so how the fuck do you have physic powers to freestyle...Doesnt make sense

...third "lol, you dont get it? disconnected, birthed, maimed umbilical cord? maimed= cut, disconnected..u know that..at birth they cut that cord off, "

For their reigns greed is unneeded, I dont get what thats supposed to mean.

fourth...."im trying to say im so smart intellectuals haunt me"

Alright, I'll take that one.

fifth..."i admit i never really heard about it, but i think someone said something bout physcics?"

That doesn't answer what it means to annoy someones soul in a quest to depths of poles.

sixth..."once again tried to multi hard"

Lol

[bullet_boy46]

well, i wrote it search that fashizzle

plus depths of poles, i was trying to say "annoy there souls as long as poles" i will annoy there souls forever....poles could go on forever

forget those....for me how was it? or are you still speculating?

[Solace]

This is a pole. It ends somewhere.

For you it was good, it's just hard to believe you went from sucking hard on 1 to 2 syllable multies to 6 syllable multies now.

[bullet_boy46]

This is a pole. It ends somewhere.

For you it was good, it's just hard to believe you went from sucking hard on 1 to 2 syllable multies to 6 syllable multies now.

you havent been looking at my previous stuff, ive actually been doing really good

im dropping another get ready to discrdit me

[Weather Man]

Nice flow.