Mind Trauma

[bullet_boy46]

bullet_boy in here, my versatility has been feared
i come equipped with that necessary gear
that is uniquely engineered to leave you weeping for you peers
your tears is the price you pay for living on this sphere
i let them act fly, to bring them down like aaliyah
revolution of the righteous, you can call me rebel leader
the commander of the squadron, shows no mercy, gives no leeway
and demonstrates why crocodile hunters cant beat a sting ray
i will never walk for cheesecake, trade in fame for my dignity?
id rather rip my tongue out and be useless to this industry
im a true blood killer, my voodoos iller, but I aint cajun
im guaranteed to leave you tripping
like when white girls run from jason
no im not a racist, i spread this hate equally
its the evil me who easily gets ecstatic with the evil deeds
need lame ones to prey on, hes back.....blame the seance
i said flame-on and became the angel of chaos
i will eternally speak on, and be remembered for eons
continue to eat lames like a retard with new crayons

[Fa-Q]

BB, you need to work on a couple things. I really liked that Aaliyah line, but it needs to be perfected and I liked the overall feel of the piece. You need to work on vacab a little more and multi-complexity. But overall really liked the piece and its good to see you posting again.

[bullet_boy46]

BB, you need to work on a couple things. I really liked that Aaliyah line, but it needs to be perfected and I liked the overall feel of the piece. You need to work on vacab a little more and multi-complexity. But overall really liked the piece and its good to see you posting again.

thanks man, also if you wanna see gomez pics, i gotta site for free

[bullet_boy46]

OFF-TOPIC: http://www.starcelebs.com/celebs/selena_gomez.shtml
ON-TOPIC: bump

[bullet_boy46]

bump

[Rain Matrix]

not bad, some sick lines in there but could have been tidied up more

[bullet_boy46]

not bad, some sick lines in there but could have been tidied up more

thanks guys