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Postby Enimee » Sep 9th, '10, 00:16

when i said im savage, i meant it bastard so take it or leave it
cause these days rappers be acting like divas they aint really devious
thats wack absurd cause ive mastered this craft sir so its my HOUR
you fag nerds couldnt have words or be DVS if i removed the vowels
WOW, dats very stupid, the white yellow canary cupid, you cant fuck wit E
CAUSe i Scare these dudes wit, snares and boom tss, without touchin the beat
lyrics over your head above your conscious like halo's homee but i dont reach
cause its no fuckin contest when you have fagget ass competitors like these
so ive toppled the pedestal and achieved my peak with out even takin a step
hit this talentless fuck in the chest, knees weak, insert comma, pause take a breath
so when i say you got 60 minutes to live you can revert to the pretext
like this dudes working on wonders flipping midgets the way his verbs be brief specs
of detrimental verses severin beasts heads im the lyrical beowulf of this shit
an instrumental servant settlin these debts, you sold your soul and still suck, aint that some shit
i hate when fake rappers test, lookin like JUSTIN BIEBERS little fucking brother
ill take and rape rappers mothers cause i am Just-in Beavers, the father of your little brother
but let me stop while im ahead, this shits about to get really fucking psycho
cause enimee was sayin the shit that he said back when rappers actually participated in the multi cypher

annd as it should be done

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=twCbO_7v9fw

i wonder if anyone actually can break this down and catch all the metaphors, these are lyrics kiddies, easy shit
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Re: school

Postby classthe_king » Sep 9th, '10, 00:52

lol
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: school

Postby Enimee » Sep 9th, '10, 05:19

creative , real intelligent Einstein your wit amazes me
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Re: school

Postby Weather Man » Sep 9th, '10, 07:44

Lol.. this was funny. Nice one though
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