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Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 4th, '10, 06:44

todays been really fucky
this song
pushed me to write a quick verse while i'm up late
wrote it without a beat so forgive me it's sloppy :b:
just getting ish off my chest


you still wanna talk? yet your sorry that you did this...
well it's fuck what we had, where were going, mind your buisness
8 months down the drain & now i'm going insane
I should of seen this coming though...I really can't complain
because I said alot of stuff that I guess I'd regret
but you gave up on me...that's why i'm so depressed
I thought we'd float away but I guess we we're sinking
now my brains all baked from the smoking & drinking
I'm addicted to the pain, I'm addicted to the darkness
I'v been fucked up since my birth & I guess i'll stay heartless
because i'm lonley as fuck...i have no true friends or family
any friends of mine pick on me, everyone's ashamed of me
I thought that you'd save me...I guess I was mistaken
it feels like you raped me...i'm nervous & i'm shaking
i'v lost my motivation...I don't know when i'll talk to you
honestly...I feel like shit...cause in my dreamz I thought of you

When I'm alone
I feel so much better
And when I'm around you
I don't feel

(Chorus)
Together
It doesn't feel right at all
Together
Together we've built a wall
Together holding hands we'll fall
Hands we'll fall
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby Solace » Sep 4th, '10, 06:46

It wasn't lyrically exciting or nothing but due to the situation and this being straight up from the heart I couldn't help but think this is a good way of venting it. Feel better PK, and keep at the writing. :y:
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '10, 03:05

Solace wrote:It wasn't lyrically exciting or nothing but due to the situation and this being straight up from the heart I couldn't help but think this is a good way of venting it. Feel better PK, and keep at the writing. :y:


word life thanks Solace
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby classthe_king » Sep 7th, '10, 03:08

:'(


<3 It
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '10, 03:11

classthe_king wrote::'(


<3 It


word life I <3 it too because

WHEN I'M ALONE I FEEL SO MUCH
& WHEN IM AROUND YOU I DONT FEEL.....
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Sep 7th, '10, 16:49

:'(

keep ur head up bro,i like the verse too.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '10, 19:28

thanks :y:
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Re: whenImaloneIfeelsomuchbetter&whenimaroundyouidontfeel

Postby Robbie G » Sep 9th, '10, 20:35

I really liked it. Not very lyrically but emotionally it was great. i can definitely relate to that..... :'(
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