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Victory...

Postby mcZu » Aug 28th, '10, 01:07

Been a while since I dropped one of my ''freestyle'' verses, it's basically just me being lyrical over an existing beat. I always write these verses when I'm bored, I wrote this one today... If my recording quality gets an upgrade I might end up recording it.

I don’t fuck with you little boys I’m not a catholic pastor
I’ll make you jump off a cliff like I’m Esther Baxter
I’ll make you move faster, I’ve mastered the art of being a master
Pardon me, but may I ask ya, do you really want a disaster?
Just asses the factors, ‘cause I gas ya when I pass ya
I’m an assassin with my lyrical assessments
I go hard on beats, producers should sue me for harassment
When they see my establishment they witness embarrassment
With just one track, yes... I’m an astonishment
I’ll make Kanye look insecure, yes... I’m that confident
My lyrical stature is a monument, check the facts
‘cause I attack fast and murder cats with a circular blast
And I don’t hold back like a vertebra cast
Do you get that? This isn’t a fucked up set of acts
I’m ending you like Soulja Boi’s career ‘cause he knocked up Kat Stacks
Don’t get sad, you’ll only win once a blue lunar
I’m getting y’all mad like the Drake marrying Minaj rumor
This is above super, if I want I can lose ya
Bars complex ‘cause my source is XL you losers
I’m so cold, even Lucifer starts melting when I stop
They invented Visine when they envisioned when I drop
A verse, real Hip Hop, got bars for days I’m leaking in songs
Call me Vado, the way I eat pussies when I rap is like I’m speaking in tongs
I’m a rap beacon for some...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Victory...

Postby classthe_king » Aug 28th, '10, 04:18

You're right, that was dope
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Victory...

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 28th, '10, 19:29

Yeah Zu was pretty dope man, some good punches. I've mastered the art of bein a master lol I like that
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Victory...

Postby mcZu » Aug 29th, '10, 02:46

Thanks, guys.
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Re: Victory...

Postby mcZu » Aug 29th, '10, 22:47

Thanks, Stevie.
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Re: Victory...

Postby mcZu » Sep 6th, '10, 02:49

B to the UMP.
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Re: Victory...

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 12th, '10, 00:26

pretty fuckin dope dude :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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