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Caution!!

Postby marshalryder » Sep 12th, '10, 19:35

Careful to consume the cunning combination of charisma and charm ceaselessly coming from my lips. I convey no covenant of censorship, but only a capricious congress of caffeine and creativity. No mere cornucopia of clever words and candid conversation, but a catalyst of constant content. Creepy and critical, a cabaret of cliché compliments and competition beyond caliber. Challenges for contempt communists and contorted critics. A conceived concoction that cannot be comprehended by conventional means. A cancerous conception of thoughts both comforting and cynical. Crazy it may sound, but this cacophony of consonants is canon, and I am in cahoots with only my cranium. C'est Moi. I am the king of Crunk. But you may call me.....



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somethin i wrote for my about me page on facebook.but those mofos never cared to look.this shit is real easy..i'm not that great a writer...but wanted to share.. :smoking:
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Re: Caution!!

Postby ShaBruv » Sep 12th, '10, 20:51

good but sort your structure out
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: Caution!!

Postby marshalryder » Sep 12th, '10, 21:04

ShaBruv wrote:good but sort your structure out

bro i have no clue wat yu sayin...all i can say is thanx and this was just a one time thing..just wanted to share with yu guys..
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Re: Caution!!

Postby classthe_king » Sep 12th, '10, 21:14

ShaBruv wrote:good but sort your structure out


This isn't a rap lol
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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