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Journeying Farther

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Journeying Farther

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 13th, '10, 23:59

my room is like a Secluded Prison, this is how I'm Used ta Living
I have made Two Incisions on optical nerves to Remove my Vision

so I can be blind to the hell that were About ta See in Reality
space is where I can be Out of Reach with the heavens Surrounding Me

looking down on a vast lake of fire, seeing the whole World in Flames
as familiar faces Hurt and Pain, I wish that I could Hurl this Rain

and Destroy the Void that lies Between Us with one Clean Cut
all I remember is emptiness, so why do they say that I've Seen Love

the Things I Say are too personal for another to try and Imitate
I will Assimilate with all that Brings me Hate and somehow Integrate

the hands on the clock move slowly as the passing Minutes Race
soon my flesh will materialize and I will start to Disintegrate

my souls as cold as ninenty nine Below on a Winter Day
some say that I let Go and I have so I can Begin ta Fade

my body will be a hollow shell with no vital Sign Response
it wasn't hard to Find me Huh? am I lost becuz my Mind is Gone
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Re: Journeying Farther

Postby Strictt Ame » Sep 14th, '10, 01:28

Imagery and vocab was nice on this piece, real nice man..keep it up
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