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stairs to my Heaven

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 15th, '10, 05:32

is there an escape out of here, i don't think so
but i'm aware what i will endure, i swear

it's been crystal clear for very many years
and now i'm less than a month til i disappear

but all i want isn't really near
the horror haunts me in the mirror

let my wings grow, get me far from this nightmare
open up more windows even tho i'm just scared

but i am no longer little, i must persevere
or be forever brittle and never cured

by my devil puttin fear in my head to
have me switch gears but to settle

i do swear i'm to battle, i'll shed some tears
but i'm ready, steppin up to a better level

a different tier, before i mellow
and end sincere, repaired spared

instead allow the shadows
to follow me down to my Hell hole

hello, i found the stairs to my Heaven
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: stairs to my Heaven

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 15th, '10, 15:30

very deep, i like it
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Re: stairs to my Heaven

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 15th, '10, 19:59

thanx for checkin this out and i'm glad you see my emotion
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: stairs to my Heaven

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 15th, '10, 22:46

Good to see you writing agan man :y: You have always had really great emotion. the 2 lines thing never really clicked with my, I know you and Rain both do that but you two still have a good way to get emotion in there. Good drop bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: stairs to my Heaven

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 16th, '10, 00:26

thanx, i like writing this way sometimes for an easier read. i should be posting a lot more often now i'm back in the states and i've got the internet.

2 more wks mufukaz til i'm out the army. fuck stop loss! (9 months is too long)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: stairs to my Heaven

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 16th, '10, 00:46

Glad ya ass is still here man lookin forward to it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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