A verse I guess...

[ThomasJ]

What you gonna do when your life becomes hard
When fighting-like scars appear on your heart without a cause
When you feel like a misfit,and get rejected
And all this sick shit makes your head infected
When your flesh and blood hates you,and you get abandoned
Life goes by fast,just one sec,you're stranded
You start to shiver,drink alcohol,it fucks your liver
Up,even worse,you become a druggie
You don't want opinions,you think you're fucking lovely
And even tho you seem ruff,you just waiting for your momma's hug,see
I understand what you're going through right now
You ask : "Why live knowing you'll die,why?"
Well it's the way of the world,on this planet called Earth
Some live in perfection,other just get to know hurt
So if your life sucks and you ran outta luck,shit
Grab the pen,lemme see what you can come up with

[Rain Matrix]

not bad, good story telling

keep dropping

[Edge]

i like it man, good emotion, flowed nice for the most part and had some nice rhymes