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Respect

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 17th, '10, 02:47

Intrumental: http://www.shadowville.com/?s=blood+sta ... ats+%C2%BB

[Verse 1]
Do I gotta be from some damn hood to be taken seriously,
Oh, no I'm not a gangsta so I'm a dumb delirious being,
You got some skill that's cool, but ya ass still at school,
Huh...okay, here's the gun stay real back fool,
Before I spray, shoot, like an ape brute, and I may loot,
You're brain, mayne oops, this is why I'm an insane dude,
In an insanestitute yet y'all claim to wild out,
Wow, y'all suckers claim to be how vile,
I don't use no AK's, or glocks to make rappers brain dead,
I use my mouth to kill y'all so on that you should blame it,
But, every single dude I know believes I'm just fronting,
They stop listening to me when I try to bust something,
But, when the next black guy spits 'bout clubs he's god,
He does drugs, he's hard, he fucks sluts, he's raw,
And I'm tired of this you better start to respect me,
'Fore this sitation takes a turn for deadly, yo...

[Chorus]
Why don't I get respect?, (My respect)
Enough haven't I bled?, (Respect me)
Is it something I said, (Respecting)
I'll try to get some til death, (Respect)
What does it mean to have respect from people?,
Does it mean you're mentally strong, not feeble?,
Does it mean as a leader the masses see you?,
Or is it cause you're a villain corrupted and evil?,

[Verse 2]
Man fuck, it seems everyday of life has the same routine,
At a gig guys would yell my name, say "you stink!",
Really wouldn't be surprised that until I start rapping,
Them ignorant muh'fuckas would be caught babbling,
Next day they'd just act like they never saw it happen,
Even if my show was on international broadcasting,
No raps of rock passing or gat and glock blasting,
Unlike these studio thugs, man even the lord asking,
What the fuck is happening, stop your bullshits,
Got guns? put a cap in 'em, triggers! bullets!,
Y'all some cool pricks, I suppose y'all pack snipers,
Oh don't strike us fight, bite us like drac-vipers,
But, do in rap fight us, mean and my words savage,
Leaving you jerks palid, with a dazed, hurt cabbage,
Trust me I burp ballads, yeah I chose to not shit 'em,
Not my kind of spitting, I prefer to leave minds itching but...

[Chorus]
Why don't I get respect?, (My respect)
Enough haven't I bled?, (Respect me)
Is it something I said, (Respecting)
I'll try to get some til death, (Respect)
What does it mean to have respect from people?,
Does it mean you're mentally strong, not feeble?,
Does it mean as a leader the masses see you?,
Or is it cause you're a villain corrupted and evil?,

[Verse 3]
Don't you dare to even whine as no love is given,
As zero fucks are given, as I get no luck in living,
I waited for my respect and I got literal crap,
You praised riduculed trash and not real lyrical rap,
My lyrical, spiritful rap, you hear this you blacks?,
I ain't tryna be racist but we need some miracle clap,
From a fucking genie for y'all to even hear me, to see me,
Cause I'm light-skinned, yet in my lion heart I know no one can beat me!,


[Chorus]
Why don't I get respect?, (My respect)
Enough haven't I bled?, (Respect me)
Is it something I said, (Respecting)
I'll try to get some til death, (Respect)
What does it mean to have respect from people?,
Does it mean you're mentally strong, not feeble?,
Does it mean as a leader the masses see you?,
Or is it cause you're a villain corrupted and evil?,
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Re: Respect

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 17th, '10, 03:03

i like the chorus best, the verses didn't have much bang, they didn't hit hard for me. try to get your real emotions out there
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Respect

Postby Weather Man » Sep 17th, '10, 07:10

Really good, I like the chorus too, this is some sick stuff, keep doing your thing man.
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Re: Respect

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 17th, '10, 21:36

Thanks for the feed guys :happy:
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