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Isn't it ironic?

Postby J Roc » Sep 18th, '10, 17:57

The Smartest Kid In The Class Was Disabled
Cuz somehow I Cheated on a test and STILL failed
I robbbed a house, and all i took was a ski mask
Then i got on 6 different kinds of drugs in Rehab
Isn't it Ironic To Say.. a Lie's applied When a Promise Is Made
Palm To My Face, i Threw up The Vomit I Ate
Im Lying if I Say Lying Is a Honest Mistake
I like it rough So light it up until it Burns Like helll
Then bust the whip out cuz it Feeels Good to Hurt Myself
I always go to school, but end up Skipping Off
and theres never pieces on the floor when i hit the bong



Song Isn't done i just gotta bail now .......................
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Re: Isn't it ironic?

Postby J Roc » Sep 18th, '10, 18:34

OKAY i get bitches i get ur point already

i didn't know u guest starred in a south park episode tho

http://www.google.ca/imgres?imgurl=http ... =190&ty=68


i didn't think that was u at first, but that link lookss oddly similar to ur pictures lmaooo peace
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Re: Isn't it ironic?

Postby J Roc » Sep 18th, '10, 18:49

Yup u hit the nail on the head with that anology.

Ur the only one that cares enough in a argument over the net to say u have friends .. lmao.

Yo TR ... i do crack, i dont have any friends, im sociallly awkward, i jack off to male pornos, i finger my hairy cunt, i lick girls vagina's 10 minutes after they get fucked by a mexican.

Fuck i'lll say anything siii. idc about my online rep.

EDIT im gone now have fun.
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Re: Isn't it ironic?

Postby Tash8 » Sep 18th, '10, 19:42

i like the juxataposition and irony bro...
i think this line sums it up perfectly

Then i got on 6 different kinds of drugs in Rehab

good little piece, btw i dont think dis-ab-led and still-failed rhyme, but if u manage to do it, nice try
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Re: Isn't it ironic?

Postby $0 R3@L » Sep 18th, '10, 20:12

i thought it was pretty sick,props :y:
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Re: Isn't it ironic?

Postby BILI » Sep 18th, '10, 20:14

I`m starting to like this poor kid :y:

Nice drop tho
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Re: Isn't it ironic?

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 19th, '10, 06:17

The threw up the part flowed perfectly. Interested to see how the whole peice ends up lookig lik
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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