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Kill The Demons

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Kill The Demons

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 20th, '10, 04:22

Yeah, it's unfinished. I know but just feed this one please and I'll post the whole song later when I'm done :smoking:

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[Verse 1]
If I could kill anyone on earth, I'd kill the demons,
Roaming around our earth as they steal the jesus,
The god, the peaceful, from inside our bodies,
As they laugh manically when we die from shotties,
Killuminati, is what Makaveli wanted,
We're sorry, that we've never done it,
Maybe if I was just a little older I'd accomplish it,
Cause my mind's to strong to fall for zombie shit,
I ain't no damn puppet, I know 'bout this subject,
But, I'm too young to know right? oh well fuck it,
I can't do shit about it cause my voice is too low,
I ain't relevant yet, yeah it annoys me to know,
So for now just let me be unheard and irrelevant,
Don't worry yo, I'll make sure to pull an elephant,
And remember all of this shit when I hit it big,
So keep on moaning 'bout me, "that frickin kid",
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Re: Kill The Demons

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 20th, '10, 20:28

I'll definitely take all this you said into consideration when I post the whole song in a few. Thanks for checking it out and I'll be feeding yours in a sec :y:
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Re: Kill The Demons

Postby Jay-Hova » Sep 20th, '10, 22:41

bumping this while I finish the whole song :whistle:
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