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I guess I had to

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 27th, '10, 22:45

a couple years ago, I came face to face with the Death of Love
cuz I Pressed my Luck and somewhere along the way I Messed it Up

I Guess I Must have Said Enough to kill happiness Ahead of Us
my heart was calling out for me, maybe I should have Kept in Touch

the Stress it cuts me so deep that I spend my days Gettin' Buzzed
your seeing the Progression Of the man that I Never Was

or Will Be, label me Guilty, as I find ways to Deal with the Pain
it'll be worth the hurt, if I can somehow stop Feeling so Strange

I was looking for answers but a harsh reality is All I Found
the highest Walls Surround me and now they're Fallin' Down

I don't Care ta know that the end feels like it's Very Close
There I go, on my own Fairly Froze cuz the Air is Cold

but I keep walking the thin line between Dispair and Hope
whenever I shut my eyes, I'm forced to Stare at Ghosts

some may laugh at that but it's far from Hysterical
it's a product of a Terrible world, your not Prepared to Know
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Re: I guess I had to

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 28th, '10, 00:44

very good wordplay, some points seemed choppy but overall this piece is great to read
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: I guess I had to

Postby Solace » Sep 28th, '10, 03:31

I loved it :worship:

Rain killing the multiflow game lol
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Re: I guess I had to

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 28th, '10, 04:00

I haven't dropped in awhile so I dropped this, I know I can do better tho

time to write a new one up
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