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For Granted (One of my best in awhile)

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For Granted (One of my best in awhile)

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 28th, '10, 07:09

Presently pain pressures me, it's unpleasant
it's like there's a hex on me, i suspect it
cuz from every direction i feel affected
how can i deal with being neglected?
i can't see where i'm headed, for real
there's no answer key or even a legend
and it's leadin me to the edge of this planet
will i defeat it or let it proceed to repeat it's damage
cuz dammit, many things i stand on seem vanished
plus instead of leavin this field of false dreams
i conceil my depression, man i can't stand it
i need to scream, who's the bandit of my scene
bringin panic thru my human being
i want to ban it, then my future could bring
sanity i took for granted, now i'm upset
my profanity's back, i use as trajectory
check my directory, heck, no mechanic
could re-piece this wreck, what a tragedy
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Sep 28th, '10, 22:07, edited 1 time in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: For Granted (One of my best in awhile)

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 28th, '10, 11:47

thanx for the feed man :D I think I should continue working on these lyrics later tonight.
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