[Lolballs]

[Solace]

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[classthe_king]

This is goona make me cry
I could have written this

[Acula M.D.]

I'm gonna swaggerjack you in 3....2...1...

[Solace]

This is goona make me cry
I could have written this

Glad you feel that way, not in a mean way but it's good to know writing could have such an effect, you know?

Apart from the last part about the person meaning a lot still, I can really relate. Sounds like my ex, whom I've gotten most of the inspiration for my songs from. Heh. And my songs are not happy.

Thanks for checking,

I'm gonna swaggerjack you in 3....2...1...

Haha it was really good so fuck you for doing what I do even better lol.

EDIT: I'll be using parts from this, and the first one that I posted up in a project I'm titling "A Personal Solace". It's a very short read, but I'm not much of a writer so it's perfectly fine for me. I think I'll post the first chapter today. The next chapter next week. And so forth, 'til all 5 chapters are done. Yeah, I told you it was short.

[Acula M.D.]

Well if I'd known it was a project I would have left better criticism. I thought the diction was fine tbh.

[Solace]

I didn't know what I was going to do with it when I first wrote it, I just did it out of the blue and I got to thinking that it may be good for me to practice on writing this kind of literature. And thanks. I don't know if you saw what was previously here, but I've had a change in heart. I know who to ask.