6 months broken hearted,,, i <3 you with all my <3

[J Roc]

I donno the time-of-the-week, your all-that-i-see... Yesterday Was Tuesdayy, Dawg
You Hear Birds-Chirpin In Third-Person, Somebody Made my Blue Jay Stop
Everybodys so Happy-now that You Have-Yourself a New J Roc,
while I rip my hair out so much, its not the same when i rip my toupe off
Dude, Be Careful.. Theres Bush-In-Her-Pants, plus She Looks Like a Man.. Can u Do a Scarecrow?
Listen-The-Fuck-Up! I Feel like i got bit-by-the-love-bug then shot with cupids arrow
Were Exactly Alike, u Traumatized Your Own, all i ever wanted was you, in Body, Mind And Soul
I Aint Over-It Im In Broken-Bits And My Heart Is Kinda Sewn
You Said You know what its like, But You aint even Talking Like You Know



efffit.

[Mr. Chambers]

link of feedback?

[J Roc]

lmao @ me not seeeing some new rules............

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there u go haha

[Ka0t1c]

some parts were weird but i can't argue abut how well written those lines were, great rhyming, i liked this overall