Matrix Like Habitat

[Rain Matrix]

So out of no where this texthead hears a silent beat in tha wind

Dot dot dot dot dot da, Dot dot dot dot dot da

me unplug, my 1 love is some bud, set ta see a legacy of rain
out of control, it's about 2 unfold, I'll neva let up keys must change

into a thought box, I drop off, what's been called a lost cause
I'm not lost, I put candy in yur mouth, and u think pop rocks

oh no, theres a photo, of where I won't go, my final shows flow
I like stages, I fight ta say this, may it, mean tha rains local

partially crazy, I scar skulls please make me, welcome 2 my hell
this is why I'm rain, think about it, this guys well with no dry spell

still these flames of change, burn me like remains of brains on u and next door
watch me gain tha range, and reclaim tha game, so do u want 2 explore

[Rae]

thats good!

i always like reading your stuff.
b/c u have this certain thing about ur writing.
its hard to explain lol

but yeah its good
keep it up

[J Roc]

yea i agree wit rae,ur drops always dope Rain

i likes it this time 2

[James R.]

It was decent. Some of the lines were too wordy and overly complex, but it was still decent. The 6th line was a really weak rhyme and that bothered me, but aside from that it was solid.

[Ka0t1c]

some of it seems outta place just slightly but your multis cover up some of the rough edges, still this is a good read

[J Roc]

3 Years and 4 months ago ............ jesus i wrote like a handicap ^^^^ hahaha

[Xray]

some of it seems outta place just slightly but your multis cover up some of the rough edges, still this is a good read

Damn son, it took you 3 years and 4 months to feed?

Most pointless bump I've seen yet.