Drunk Freetypin

[Just Silver]

I have one shot and way over the limit
Alcohol figuring like bartenders sipping
Knowing what they know from the way their gifted
Pot prescriptions plot with precision
Top all who listen stop in for a visit
Marks a hospitals pigeon a pilots decision
For the likes of a given, laid back crack magician
Baking soda in the kitchen,arms and hammers
I'll harm ya and brand ya dangerous much like cancer
But more sick you couldn't even forfeit
I score shit like higher than yours much tigher than yours
Dutch lighted from yours I mean your whore of course
So i stay sore and coarse and rigid with gats
Get at your bigoted tracks take your fitted caps
And shit on the brim give it back and then grin
Living lax and no rent im apart from it
No apartment for none a part seller

[classthe_king]

Seriously, did anyone check the new creative writing guidelines?

[Just Silver]

Seriously, did anyone check the new creative writing guidelines?

sorry i have been gone for a while i don't know what i did wrong

[Mr. Chambers]

3) One link of feedback you have given will need to be posted before you post a song.

[Just Silver]

3) One link of feedback you have given will need to be posted before you post a song.

Note taken

[ilovebender.com]

I have one shot and way over the limit
Alcohol figuring like bartenders sipping
Knowing what they know from the way their gifted
Pot prescriptions plot with precision
Top all who listen stop in for a visit
Marks a hospitals pigeon a pilots decision
For the likes of a given, laid back crack magician
Baking soda in the kitchen,arms and hammers
I'll harm ya and brand ya dangerous much like cancer
But more sick you couldn't even forfeit
I score shit like higher than yours much tigher than yours
Dutch lighted from yours I mean your whore of course
So i stay sore and coarse and rigid with gats
Get at your bigoted tracks take your fitted caps
And shit on the brim give it back and then grin
Living lax and no rent im apart from it
No apartment for none a part seller

Well with guns drugs alcohol and threats of violence and stuff, I'd say you'd have parents worried, somewhere in this crazy world, so kudos to that and for making a new flow of a topic I feel is over used but if you write about life, then you write about life be it whatever you decide to write about so I've got to give you the benifit of the doubt and assume until told otherwise that you did write this from life, if you did or didn't, the graphic detail set the scene, it seems.

[Yah-hah]

Yo wats up Silver aint seen ya around here in awhile. At least you still got some multis. When I got some free time we'll have to write some shit. I liked it, I enjoy seein people just type watever they're thinkin at the moment from time to time, I do it alot.

Mind feedin my new drop
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