letter to my unborn child

[joesurber]

you have yet to open your eyes
and i have yet to watch you rise

you were my plan
my plan to produce a better man
a better man than i am
and to do the things that i cant

youre all ive dreamed and more
youre everything your mother bore
take these wings my son
and ill watch you soar

take these notes and do as i say
live, love, learn, grow, and play
go to school, please do good, and always pray
find a job, get a girl, never lie
and when it comes
that i should die
dont mourn my death
celebrate my life

the only thing i ask of you
is that you do as you wish to do
and that is my wish for you


"dont measure life by the breaths you take
ive become my fathers biggest mistakes"

[Fa-Q]

This piece confuses me

[Mr. Chambers]

link of feedback?

[ilovebender.com]

you have yet to open your eyes
and i have yet to watch you rise

you were my plan
my plan to produce a better man
a better man than i am
and to do the things that i cant

youre all ive dreamed and more
youre everything your mother bore
take these wings my son
and ill watch you soar

take these notes and do as i say
live, love, learn, grow, and play
go to school, please do good, and always pray
find a job, get a girl, never lie
and when it comes
that i should die
dont mourn my death
celebrate my life

the only thing i ask of you
is that you do as you wish to do
and that is my wish for you


"dont measure life by the breaths you take
ive become my fathers biggest mistakes"

Oh wow, how deep.