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Leave Me Alone

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Leave Me Alone

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 12th, '10, 02:03

Took me 4 days to write for some reason so I hope y'all enjoy it. Oh and the first 4 lines on each verse are sung so that's why their shorter than the others :y:

http://www.shadowville.com/1285/genres/ ... rime-scene

Written to this beat. ^

[Hook]x2
I suggest you just leave me alone now,
Stay distant while I breathe and I live now,
Don't bother me when I go and I zone out,
Leave me alone what do I have to give out?,

[Verse 1]
I don't know what it is with people these days,
As I sit and wonder while I see you in daze,
I pray to god but I just get more impatient,
Questions still unanswered, I'm bored of waiting,
(Yo!) where are my answers master cause I see nothing but a disaster,
In a poor bastard, plastered with scratches, feeling battered,
With emotions all scattered, so where to put this blame at?,
I know it's always the same rap, yeah depressed, insane, sad,
Maybe I'ma a tame cat, that can't stand up to face his issues,
Type to paste the tissues to his face if you made him pissed too,
And I ain't afraid of pistols so expect much blood and brains,
Fuck my pains but I'm still stuck in mud with no luck in chains,
Feels like a ghost is behind me cause I see no one having my back,
Before I have a spazzing attack and my sight goes back into black,
Leave me alone though I might seem like I just won't take a stand,
If I feel the slightest touch of fingers on my back, I'll break a hand!,

[Hook]x2
I suggest you just leave me alone now,
Stay distant while I breathe and I live now,
Don't bother me when I go and I zone out,
Leave me alone what do I have to give out?,

[Verse 2]
Trust me I'd prefer to not take any action,
Fighting and feuding just isn't my passion,
But, if you persist on my button bashing,
Me and you gon' be crossing paths and crashing,
(Yo!) you push and bite and look for fights but I must shoo my pride,
Oh, so this is the hood, alright, I'll go 'head and book my flight,
Yeah I just don't belong here, like those rock kids with long hair,
How can people be like this, are they drunk from some strong beer,
Homey you're wrong there, leave 'em alone they ain't hurting you,
It's the jerk in you, dirt in you, this weakness, this certain gloom,
That's eating and consuming you muh'fuckas at your weak souls,
I speak flows and it's deep, indeed, but to my street bros,
Stop disrespecting what everyone else spits cause of appearance,
Seriously just listen to their lyrics before you judge like parents,
We as rappers have a marriage with hip-hop so we all the same,
We brawl in vain, we all in pain, but this what we call the game,

[Hook]x2
I suggest you just leave me alone now,
Stay distant while I breathe and I live now,
Don't bother me when I go and I zone out,
Leave me alone what do I have to give out?,

[Guitar]

[Verse 3]
So you won't (so you won't),
Let me go (let me go),
No escaping (no escaping),
What my fate is, (what my fate is)
I think this fucking world just doesn't want to leave me alone,
I can't breathe by own or even go weep and grieve in my zone,
Keep on fucking with me, and it's sad that no one understands,
The crude, foul feeling of crawling out a hole with sunburnt hands,

[Hook]x2
I suggest you just leave me alone now,
Stay distant while I breathe and I live now,
Don't bother me when I go and I zone out,
Leave me alone what do I have to give out?,

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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)
Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)


- Far Away, Tech N9ne And Krizz Kaliko
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Re: Leave Me Alone

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 12th, '10, 20:26

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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)
Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)


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Re: Leave Me Alone

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 13th, '10, 20:45

Yeah, I was...again lol and I re-read the 1st verse and realized how bad it is so yeah you're right.

Thanks for the feed Steve :y:
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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)
Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)


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