Link Or Feedback by ilovebender.com

[ilovebender.com]

I'm rapping yet I'm trapped when,
I see a line that's link or feedback,
backing my way, as I'm trying to move forward but
I gotta pay my dues today, so I pay, yea I pay
say what I ever I break free from
my mind, write you a line or nine or
ten, what ever, comes through my mind, at your ori
-ginal work, I lurk, now reading, not smurking but working
as I'm sure that, when this sh*t hits, I won't see a line, it gets
on my tits, which fits a verse that is worse than this, if
they never, no never ever reviewed any-
body's sh*t or tune first than they wouldn't
be cursed with the line that is
link or feedback
so you guys can just keep that
and feed on this

peace love and chicken grease!

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[J Roc]

Hmmmmmmmm Work on everything

[ilovebender.com]

Hmmmmmmmm Work on everything

I'm rapping yet I'm trapped when,
I see a line that's link or feedback,
backing my way, as I'm trying to move forward but
I gotta pay my dues
so I pay, yea I pay
say what ever I
break free from
my mind
write you
a line or nine or ten, what ever
comes through my mind at your origin-
-nal work, I lurk now reading not smurking but working
as I'm sure that,
when this
sh*t
hits, I won't see a line, it gets
on my tits, it fits a verse that is worse than this,
vendored when renderd if they never ever reviewed any-
body's sh*t or tune first
than they wouldn't be cursed with a line
that is
link or feedback
so you guys can just
keep that and
feed on this

peace love and chicken grease!

[Solace]

Hmmmmmmmm Work on everything

Still, I don't get it. Are you retarded, or trolling?

[ilovebender.com]

Hmmmmmmmm Work on everything

Still, I don't get it. Are you retarded, or trolling?

I know you're not talking about me, this isn't spam or attention seeking, and what part of this is retarded?
Is the topic beneaf you, did the rhymes miss you, wasn't you up to my flow, what part of this was retarded?

[Solace]

Nah, I'm not saying your writing is retarded (It's not good, but I wouldn't use 'retarded' to describe someones written work), I'm saying the whole Link or Feedback thing of yours is retarded, unless you're trolling.

It's link OF feedback, how many times must you be told?

[Sam.]

Nah, I'm not saying your writing is retarded (It's not good, but I wouldn't use 'retarded' to describe someones written work), I'm saying the whole Link or Feedback thing of yours is retarded, unless you're trolling.

It's link OF feedback, how many times must you be told?

lol

[ilovebender.com]

Well, I'm not gonna re-write it now... (Basically because there's no point).

But now do I see the error of my ways...
So, cheers for that feedback Solace