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TheMasterPlan

Postby Stavros » Oct 14th, '10, 23:16

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I rip beats...killer instinct like a savage cobra
Rap composer...pickin bones like I'm a pack of vultures
On tracks you're soldiers you say your sick to the core
But I'll expose your prose like the Mitchell report
Simply I'm raw.....and my imagery I reckon
Is too sick to picture like a vampire's reflection
Any enemy who's testing, better be handy with armor
I can wage a war harder than Hannibal Barca
The snake charmer, seducing Medusa with music
Steal her powers and rock crowds till morning hours
Gorey showers of blood drip from my mug, I'm vamperic
I plant lyrics into fan's minds and damn spirits
The evil man you're fearin, you think you can take em
You must be kid-in yourself like in vitro fertilization
I'm just saying you flow...compares to a drought
Refer to me as asphyxiation cause I'ma air em out
HIP-HOP OBITUARY 2010
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"Ask me about swag, ima change the topic to lyrics
then brag plus look at you like a fag"
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Re: TheMasterPlan

Postby classthe_king » Oct 15th, '10, 20:01

This was epic
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: TheMasterPlan

Postby ShaBruv » Oct 15th, '10, 20:33

YES EPIC :worship:
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: TheMasterPlan

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '10, 21:49

Even if you might be someone from the older days that was pretty dope man. Good imagery well great lol use of words rhyme placement multis all of that man was dope. I see you tho :whistle:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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