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Bacardi and kool aid

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Bacardi and kool aid

Postby Just Silver » Oct 19th, '10, 01:09

:snack:back: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=100280

(I wrote this drunk so honestly I saved it and found it later)

Cherry plus bacardi got me thinking oddly
Probably gettin naughty with your girl cause shes a softy
Time to get the pain and the party off me
And since im feelin godly and i cant feel where my arm be
Im feelin like an army a wielded man
I feel like the whole of Afghanistan
combined with a stash of grams attached with grands
I think i'll buy platinum rubberbands
So either way im ether paid
Evil in ways you'd think existed in space
Spit so hard got blisters in my face
And since your a disgrace your dismissed
I say grace and take a piss on whoever it is
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Re: Bacardi and kool aid

Postby Emadyville » Oct 19th, '10, 03:28

haha i enjoyed it :y:
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Re: Bacardi and kool aid

Postby ThomasJ » Oct 20th, '10, 09:47

I really enjoyed this!
Great verse,really funny,especially since you were drunk when you wrote it haha.
Keep 'em comin' !
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