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Steven - Nothing is Perfect.

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Re: Steven - Nothing is Perfect.

Postby classthe_king » Oct 31st, '10, 17:23

I'd slice the throat of sweeney todd for mine.
lol
Lyrics were pretty good, I couldn't find the flow at all for this but I don't have a beat so I'll have to wait till it's recorded to get that down.
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Re: Steven - Nothing is Perfect.

Postby ilovebender.com » Nov 1st, '10, 06:39

so true.

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I guess the great ones write themselfs.
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Re: Steven - Nothing is Perfect.

Postby Block » Nov 2nd, '10, 04:00

I liked it, man. It wasn't complex at all but the message was clear. You'll develope a dope flow, I can tell just by how you're simplifying things.
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