Wordplay verse

[WakeUpShow]

When I flow, I'm like a fountain with stone cold metaphors.
Like a wrestler suplexing damn water bottles on the hard wood floor.
I got mad wordplay like an angry child who toys with the alphabet all day.
I always record in the morning like I am Tech and Sway.
With my Technical verses i make the crowd sway and other rappers step away.
I'll open your eyes wider than Stephen Hawking,
after my beautiful verses you'll be trying to stalk me.
They try to hold me down but they can't restrain me
My rap persona is the Hulk getting arrested by a Porky.
Th-Th-Th-That's all folks i'm almost tired of rapping circles,
I should remember geometry, change shapes, make on oval and jump hurdles
but i'm never out of breath because i'm a distance runner
but i'll run around you faster than lighting and leave you on your ass, what a BUMMER!!
it ain't summer, it's just me that's making it hot
i ain't a drummer, but i'm hittting your head with a pot
now slow down....just playing, pick it back up like we're playing football and u just fumbled
please don;t compare me to lil wayne even though this whole verse is all metaphors constantly mumbled.

[classthe_king]

Keep working at it. I didn't see any lines that stood out as good lines or any good concepts. Try to be more original.

[WakeUpShow]

thanks to both of you for feedback, i'll work at both. i'm gonna post another verse with less wordplay.