Close Battle

[gutawafang]

Love the relevance. Every line makes sense man. But don't overuse words in one song. For example, here you used "battle" a lot of times.

Plus, some multis were'nt so good. However if you actually rap it out, it's fucking good flow man. Keep it coming.

[Slim's Shady]

I liked how you maintained the same rhymes throughout the whole verse. That takes hard work like Lello said. Most of the multis/rhymes were good but some of 'em were kinda far-fetched rhymes.

I also found this very Eminem-ish so I'd suggest trying to stray away from that.

But, overall it was good. 7.5/10