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Cocky for no Reason

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Cocky for no Reason

Postby Mahmoud48 » Nov 26th, '10, 22:42

i feel the last verse is pretty stupid cuz if doesnt fit but ppl told me to keep it

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im rapping around these niggas like a dance
no need for evidence, im so cocky call it arrogance
hypnotizing them all as if it was a trance
call the ambulance, prevalence is what im good at
i leave you in a stance, of disdain
manifesting your brain with negative thoughts
i went in your mind and made u believe
that ur good for nothing and ur goals will never achieve
let me get serious, seriously your delirious for stepping at me
underground, mainstream wack rappers
im here to attack ya, and ill even speak in your vernacular
and I'll impacting ya like sledge hammers smacking ya
i rack the bombs from iraq to leave u in a set back
i make you believe like breathing is a privilege ,heathens
Im king james in this bitch Rick JAMES bitch im rich
feel the wrath of my dick, u prick keep licking my stick
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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Re: Cocky for no Reason

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 27th, '10, 00:18

first two lines LOOK like they rhyme but they dont unless you said -Gance- and mispronounced it....pretty good piece, maybe drop some deep stuff and switch it up a bit
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