LOL@ slim's first 2 lines. Classic Crooked I. "Too many Indians but no cheifs" Lol
Anyway, this was a good collabo. Took forever to read through all of it, lol. My only problem is the fact that the braggadocio style is really played. In order to do it well and keep people interested, you really have to come correct and be innovative with what you write.
Lines that stuck out from each person:
Slim's:
Too many straight guys, not enough gay guys,
Ask the rain gods for it to rain guys, pray wise!,
I'll grow up to be a rapping rapist priest, say what?
^^^ That made me say, "what the fuck?" Hahaha
Sentus:
Inside I’m dying for my chance to hit the stage
N spit a blaze so sick it plagues till the end of days
What I meant to say is I’ve got something inside
Wantin to rise n won’t stop till I’m touchin the skies
^^ This stuck out because the whole flow was dope as hell.
Zu:
Don’t bother, why? On the mic you just utter lies
You get no action like the other guys in The Other Guys
You’re the weak link, even my weak ink’s particles
Are enough to show the public how fake you are like a Wiki leaks article
^^ My favorite lines. They made me chuckle. The whole Joe budden punches is actually working for you, lol.
Mike:
I see you look surprised cus there was no crazy multie
No need cus I take your eyes and make you believe they’re faulty
^^^ Lol, I enjoyed those lines.
Overall, this was a pretty decent collab. i'm not sure what it's about, though? Was ther even a general theme? lol.
If any of you would like to feed my latest piece, that would be cool. Much appreciated, dudes.