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Few new Bars

Postby Raids-God » Dec 5th, '10, 09:21

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You lil Omars .. i shot you down in the wire
im incharge of Allan Sugar,
i fight fire with "fired" !
I get that real shit
Like J.cole, im about to take you much higher
than most 40 year old vetrains that 1 more day till there retired
Ill throw em of the fucking edge,
they cant reach the both there to tired
aint got energy like raids ... i fly with red bull to any destination desired
because when you as crazy as me ... you dont leave your bed your still flying
illuminati dreams each night, after i wake im a tyrant ..
hell id drop the word if lord let me
see mama cooking evil food cut her head like Michael Brea, get cut off the cast of ugly betty
Get your house taken away along with the used macheti
Its crazy being young in post 2012 ya get me ? :y:
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Re: Few new Bars

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Dec 5th, '10, 11:50

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this is real dope
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Few new Bars

Postby Raids-God » Dec 5th, '10, 11:55

Devil'sAdvocate wrote::laughing:

this is real dope


Lol thanks
But in all seriousness Michael Brea is a fucking sick freak :shakehead:
If there is a god ... he whouldnt make you kill ya mum !!! With a fucking sword !!!!!!
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Re: Few new Bars

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 5th, '10, 19:16

Flow was off and on. Good Multis tho.
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