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PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:25

Fish:
In this cold world, I see it's forever snowing
I got a cold shoulder bitch that's never blowing
Never knowing the point of living, I keep breathing
These bitches, they come, and they keep leaving
Today's the day I write about the fucking pain in me
But we know its fucking definition, it's insanity
Who would've thought the world's in need of a dildo?
I mean, the world's a fucked up bitch, for real though

PK:
I know it's hard to survive in a world so cold
there's shady bitches so heartless & they have no soul
as I write this someone is getting shot or getting raped
I don't know how to be living in a world filled with hate
lemme speak for a minute why we fighting with each other?
we should celebrate today man i thought we was brothers
the past is the past we might of said some shit but fuck it
the only option now is live for today & love it

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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby Bistnal » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:33

...Are you guys both supposed to have the same exact verse? :confusion:
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:36

Bistnal wrote:...Are you guys both supposed to have the same exact verse? :confusion:

blahahahahahaha. SHIT!!! :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby Bistnal » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:39

^Guess that's a no? :p Might wanna edit your post then lol.
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:43

Bistnal wrote:^Guess that's a no? :p Might wanna edit your post then lol.

Word. I didn't save the verse on notepad. :(

So i have to write it again, and it became like that! :confusion:

What do you think of it overall?
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby DƎRDYPK » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:51

haha I like your bars Fish

10 tens better than mine
night homie hope you shook off some that block
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '10, 05:54

DƎRDYPK wrote:haha I like your bars Fish

10 tens better than mine
night homie hope you shook off some that block

yeah word it helped. thanks alot brother :flower:
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby macdaddy019967 » Dec 3rd, '10, 06:29

u guys didnt hit me up for a collab?
smfh

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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '10, 06:36

macdaddy019967 wrote:u guys didnt hit me up for a collab?
smfh

good shit guys

I swear the God I never saw you around here. this is like the first time you post ever! :o

but yeah man, thank you. it doesn't flow, i just realized
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby Sam. » Dec 3rd, '10, 07:05

gutawafang wrote:Fish:
In this cold world, I see it's forever snowing
I got a cold shoulder bitch that's never blowing

Never knowing the point of living, I keep breathing
These bitches, they come, and they keep leaving
Today's the day I write about the fucking pain in me
But we know its fucking definition, it's insanity
Who would've thought the world's in need of a dildo?
I mean, the world's a fucked up bitch, for real though

PK:
I know it's hard to survive in a world so cold
there's shady bitches so heartless & they have no soul
as I write this someone is getting shot or getting raped
I don't know how to be living in a world filled with hate
lemme speak for a minute why we fighting with each other?
we should celebrate today man i thought we was brothers

the past is the past we might of said some shit but fuck it
the only option now is live for today & love it


These lines were the hard hitting part ,not being biased and shit but pk had a slightly better verse tho. :smoking:
Guta too much use of the "Bitch" word actually didn't flow with the concept. :happy:
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 3rd, '10, 10:23

I know right? The initial one didn't have thaat word at all. :( I spent 15 mins on that. Then I lost it cuz i didn't save it. :whistle:

So I spent 5 minutes on this one. :D

Thanks a lot man! :happy:
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby Sam. » Dec 3rd, '10, 10:51

gutawafang wrote:I know right? The initial one didn't have thaat word at all. :( I spent 15 mins on that. Then I lost it cuz i didn't save it. :whistle:

So I spent 5 minutes on this one. :D

Thanks a lot man! :happy:

Anytime Bruh :y:
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby classthe_king » Dec 4th, '10, 02:54

PK, your verse was so based :8)
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: PK and Fish collab- Cold World

Postby gutawafang » Dec 9th, '10, 19:15

classthe_king wrote:PK, your verse was so based :8)

:y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
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