Aitor Crow- How many times...

[LorenS.R.]

Hey guys, how do you do? Well, if I open this new topic is because I really need your opinion; let me explain you. I'm the manager of a young rapper called Crow. He will record his first demo soon but, meanwhile he uploaded one of his singles called "how many times". I would really love all of you give your opinion about it. I mean, he's not Eminem, he is only 15 years old but I think he is quite good in this shit. I bet he could become someone in rap's world.

Here is the lyric (I traduced it into english, so you can understand what he says) and the song as well.

THANKS A LOT, GUYS.

PEACE.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJoRpA6mNvo&translated=1



LYRIC

How many times…
How many times I cried and you laughed,
and I don’t understand why I’m still walking
...And I don’t understand why my heart still beats and
I know this is the beginning and I will keep sinking
in a deep ocean of dreams and hopes where
we want to be the owners, but
Years pass through us and I think we get better with them
Following my thoughts, I still hope dreaming
And it’s the only place where my dreams come true
Friends are limited, I can count them just with my fingers
I would like to live in a full humility country and
Not in a poisoned country of debility and mediocrity
And with imagination me make our dreams true
And if you are not here, there are not feelings
And I don’t know what I can do to explain you what I feel

And I’m sorry, I sorry for all the time I could not care less what you did
But from time to time, I like to think a bit in me
And I don’t know what to do, if I’m not with you
I need to feel that your arms are my coat

And I don’t know what to do for keeping you and to have some infringed happiness
I don’t want to be sad along my life
Fed up of false friends, false loves
Keeping talking about me, your rumors make hobbies
And this is one of them
To love you and to love the paper
To manifest the wounds you make above my skin
With your initials in my body, but I guess, I will delete them with the pass of time
but, where there was a fire, it will always ash remain
And I don’t have ashes, if not a devasted heart

And I’m sorry, I sorry for all the time I could not care less what you did
But from time to time, I like to think a bit in me
And I don’t know what to do, if I’m not with you
I need to feel that your arms are my coat

[classthe_king]

You need a link of feed buddy

[Block]

Although nothing rhymes in english, alot of the lines are really nice. If this were written in english I'm sure it would sound even better to me. I'm sure it rhymes well in the native language; which if what, by the way?

anyhow, as class said, you need to leave feedback in order to post here.. But the lines you posted were good.

[LorenS.R.]

Although nothing rhymes in english, alot of the lines are really nice. If this were written in english I'm sure it would sound even better to me. I'm sure it rhymes well in the native language; which if what, by the way?

anyhow, as class said, you need to leave feedback in order to post here.. But the lines you posted were good.

Well, thanks, I will say all the comments to my friend (from the other hand, you must have in account that it's a rap writen in spanish... it's obvios it has no rhyme in english. Eminem's songs have not rhyme in spanish either. If I traduced it was because I thought it could be interesting for you, for giving you a knowledge of what the lyric says, nothing more.

From the other hand, I'm really sorry men, but I don't undestand when, for example, k block says that I need to leave feedback in order to post here... excuse me, but, what do you mean? :S

In any case, thanks a lot for sharing your opinion with me. Cheers

[Solace]

That was beautiful.

[Block]

Although nothing rhymes in english, alot of the lines are really nice. If this were written in english I'm sure it would sound even better to me. I'm sure it rhymes well in the native language; which if what, by the way?

anyhow, as class said, you need to leave feedback in order to post here.. But the lines you posted were good.

Well, thanks, I will say all the comments to my friend (from the other hand, you must have in account that it's a rap writen in spanish... it's obvios it has no rhyme in english. Eminem's songs have not rhyme in spanish either. If I traduced it was because I thought it could be interesting for you, for giving you a knowledge of what the lyric says, nothing more.

From the other hand, I'm really sorry men, but I don't undestand when, for example, k block says that I need to leave feedback in order to post here... excuse me, but, what do you mean? :S

In any case, thanks a lot for sharing your opinion with me. Cheers

Oh, yeah.. I know how the whole translation process works. Even though it doesn't rhyme, the lines were great. I've always been more of a fan of what's being said, rather than rhyming a ton.

What I mean by feed back is: the rule in this forum is that you must post criticism on someone else's work, then post a link on your own topic. It's a way to keep people active and make sure everyone responds to threads and such. Sorry if I confused you.

[LorenS.R.]

))))))))))))))))))))))) thanks again, k block, you're a nice mate. Crow (the rapper of the song is very happy with the comments.... well, actually he has no idea of english but I traduce your opinions to him, so T-H-A-N-K Y-O-U V-E-R-Y M-U-C-H )

From the other hand, I understood the "feed back" BUT (yeah, I know it, sometimes I'm the queen of fools like Edguy's song) you said I have to post a link on my own topic for keeping active the members of this forum... but where do I have to post this link?? In my signature? In my presentation topic?? yeah, I know it, just kill me, I let you but please: try no to be so agressive; I only have one life :P