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Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 13th, '11, 21:05

This isn't a movie script
I am truly a lunatic
so don't get me ticked off at you, you prick
cuz I'm the wrong dude you've picked
to wanna duel against
I would give you no chance
to use your sense to advance
unless you're too humungous
for me to whoop your ass
then we're cookin with gas
cuz i refuse to lose
to the looks of your class
and i put that on wax
for real, oh yes
assholes, i do
have a few loose screws
but my hook you could catch
now would you get a clue
instead of assumin you are the best
i know you're confused
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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