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On My Level

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On My Level

Postby classthe_king » Feb 20th, '11, 16:58

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=108238

You can’t get on my level or sit on my pedestal, the vicious shit that I spit you will never do
Hit with the metal when spittin, I’m rippin this sickenin sentence of syllables, killin you
Fillin you up when the clip in, I’m cockin it back and rockin this fag, get tossed in the bag
So insane on the track, know my name on the rap, blow ya brains on ya lap, put the game on the back
Its wrath of Sentus rollin past defenses smashin with this massive fists its
Fast n vicious, the last to witness was smashed to bits its
Not even funny how the rap’s intense with a class of vengeance, don’t ask the business
Me and Troy T on a track with Wiz it’s like rollin around in a Lac with bitches
As you got the Kush in the blunt doin shit you shouldn’t have done
One puff is all it took then it’s done, getting so high that we stood with the sun
Don’t be attestin with me as I’m blessin the beats; no restin for me till I’m the best one to speak
And legend to breathe up in heaven with Pac cause this shit right here you never can stop
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: On My Level

Postby _Steven_ » Feb 20th, '11, 20:59

Idk kind of immature. The gun play and "high on the sun" parts. I can tell you weren't going for lyrics though. Killer fast flow. Keep doin it big Sentus ;)
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Re: On My Level

Postby RainMan44 » Feb 21st, '11, 02:09

You've pretty much mastered multies. Amazing. Good shit :y:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: On My Level

Postby mdemaz » Feb 21st, '11, 02:17

Multis galore..
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s/o to Eedee Python CP Horse Snake Pain SaJn Silver Cement Excitaz PK Rolly GW EG Charlotte Kasia Mel Wiz Solace TRex SliK Aone Atone Trimss Menzo Geno Fish Jaba Detroit Blogs Based lil_b IBR DA! Mono ROM NRG Bigray Hesky Francesco Yoda Noddy Raul
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Re: On My Level

Postby Just Silver » Feb 21st, '11, 02:17

real nice multi piece,

Dont know if its related with the beat? of On My Level
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