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Re: finish a winner

Postby ArsheyHaq » Apr 22nd, '11, 04:40

For your first piece ever, it's got some good rhyming :y: From the looks of it, you'll catch on quick. If you practice a little more you could be pretty good :) the punchlines really didn't go anywhere, but keep trying lol anyway, keep posting :wave:

"lyrically, im a fugitive, I take the beat and run"

^^^pretty clever^^^BUT that's pretty much the only line that worked :zipped:
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