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War With Nobody (My Diss Song)

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Re: War With Nobody (My Diss Song)

Postby Atone » May 6th, '11, 15:45

Looks pretty good, exept you mesed up a line, i'm sure the line

"You're never gonna get on my level that's why you're hating cause you wanna-me"

is supposed to say "Wanna Be"

which would make the next line sound even better

but other than that, this is a good peice, Ludacris is one of my favorite artist's, one of my main influances as well, so you can't match him, but still did good, keep em comin man
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