Maybe wrote:Any chance you can check my shit out?
No doubt, I'll do it when I get a few minutes.
Natural Oddity (UPDATE: Now a Sixteen. Please Check lol)
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Re: Natural Oddity (UPDATE: Now a Sixteen. Please Check lol)
by WakeUpShow » May 12th, '11, 11:41
No doubt, I'll do it when I get a few minutes.
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Re: Natural Oddity (UPDATE: Now a Sixteen. Please Check lol)
by classthe_king » May 12th, '11, 11:52
I was trying to give a lot of constructive criticism so I didn't say much positive stuff but this was a very good verse, better than most of what's in here.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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