FreeSpeech goes horrorcore!!!

[FreeSpeech]

OK, so I don't like posting my writing here because I see it as essentially wasting good verses should I ever wanna use them. Therefore and thuswith, I only post trash I'll never, ever use. E.g. horrorcore.
Feedback by me: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=114519

Sitting on the dusty floor
Packing up your grungy corpse
In plastic wrap, my drastic act latched with bungy cords
What I did ain't been done before
Find fun in gore, I'm Bundy's lord
PMSing whores get cheeky, lets see who can get bloody more
I'm a real oddity
Opposite of Bill Cosby
Bungee jump with your intestines
redefining a thrill hobby
Chloroforming bitches in the motel lobby
Clerk asks where I'm going, oh hell prob'ly
Buffalo Bill's idol, stuffing my kills' vital-
Organs with preservers, I'm nothing but ill, vile-
Thoughts stay racing
I'm not complacent
Till I'm topping Jason
And the cops are pacing
On their watch and stations
Trying to stop my hatred
But I got the patience
So I'm not caught I'm waiting
Ready to strike with my heaviest knife
Beheading a dyke, then resetting it right-
Above my mantle, centerpiece of the room
Replacing peace with doom, I feast on the gloom
That accompanies crime scenes
Find comfort in dime piece-
bodies in my trunk, I'm a lover of fine screams

[WinstonMARX]

The content was really really bland run of the mill stuff but your rhymes were nice and the piece is technically solid.

[Atone]

ehhhh, stay away from horrorcore man, you can do better writing normal verses,

Although, this looks really good, it seems forced, i like that line "opposite of cosby" though

actually man, after reading this a second time, i think you should record this, i like it, multi's in this are crazy, i started writing somethin like this back in 08 when i was in jail, but quickly wrote over it cuz i didn't want the guards to do some kind of bed check, find it, and think i'm in need of help or some shit lol.

being in jail can give you some crazy horrorcore style thoughts tho

[FreeSpeech]

Thanks guys. Yeah, the content is 100% trash. I'm not into horrorcore much at all, and it's not part of my lifestyle at all, I might as well have been writing about my life as an Indonesian taxi triver.

I just put it together for the multis, IDK what other types of verses I could say "grungy corpse" in.

[ArsheyHaq]

You should change the title of this thread to 'FreeSpeech is an attention whore!!!'.. Seriously, I used to like you, but you're wayy too into yourself

and I agree with you completely here:

I only post trash

this is trash...

[FreeSpeech]

You should change the title of this thread to 'FreeSpeech is an attention whore!!!'.. Seriously, I used to like you, but you're wayy too into yourself

and I agree with you completely here:

I only post trash

this is trash...

Haha I honestly have no clue who you are, your username isn't familiar. But thanks for once liking me? I'm flattered.

Well shit, Imma go cut my wrists now because some random account agreed with me that this verse is bad and said I'm too into myself. How is that exactly? Because I put my name in the title? I was making fun of myself skittle nuts, I'm a 20 year old black kid who isn't remotely horrorcore or acts like it, ever.

[ArsheyHaq]

Well shit, Imma go cut my wrists now because some random account agreed with me that this verse is bad and said I'm too into myself. How is that exactly? Because I put my name in the title? I was making fun of myself skittle nuts, I'm a 20 year old black kid who isn't remotely horrorcore or acts like it, ever.

K, shut up now. No one cares about your life story.

[FreeSpeech]

Well shit, Imma go cut my wrists now because some random account agreed with me that this verse is bad and said I'm too into myself. How is that exactly? Because I put my name in the title? I was making fun of myself skittle nuts, I'm a 20 year old black kid who isn't remotely horrorcore or acts like it, ever.

K, shut up now. No one cares about your life story.

Anonymous internet users are so hurtful

[Raids-God]

Good Stuff homes

And Fuck ArsheyHaq lil bitch with to much spare time

[Raids-God]

Good Stuff homes

And Fuck ArsheyHaq lil bitch with to much spare time

Naah, ArsheyHaq may not be known in the forum in general, he's a top 5 writer in this forum, his work in Creative Writings >>>> 75% shit on the internet and not only on this forum, including myself (and I say it loudly)

Not to pick sides with anyone, just saying, all of people on this "fight" are my homeboys, make love, not war.

Nah theres no need to try and randomly Attack him, He made some bars, leave criticism and whatever,
But dont start saying some other shit about atention hores and stuff

[WinstonMARX]

Thanks guys. Yeah, the content is 100% trash. I'm not into horrorcore much at all, and it's not part of my lifestyle at all, I might as well have been writing about my life as an Indonesian taxi triver.

Because everyone lives what they rap

[FreeSpeech]

Thanks guys. Yeah, the content is 100% trash. I'm not into horrorcore much at all, and it's not part of my lifestyle at all, I might as well have been writing about my life as an Indonesian taxi triver.

Because everyone lives what they rap

Haha nah I know, but it's not even a part of my rap style. It's 100% out of character for me, therefore "trash".

Good Stuff homes

And Fuck ArsheyHaq lil bitch with to much spare time

Thanks homie, he's just really jealous of meeeee cuz I'm want he wants to beeeee but instead of just admitting it he walks around and says all kinds of really mean things because he's just a meanie, a big weenie

[Raids-God]

Thanks guys. Yeah, the content is 100% trash. I'm not into horrorcore much at all, and it's not part of my lifestyle at all, I might as well have been writing about my life as an Indonesian taxi triver.

Because everyone lives what they rap

Haha nah I know, but it's not even a part of my rap style. It's 100% out of character for me, therefore "trash".

Good Stuff homes

And Fuck ArsheyHaq lil bitch with to much spare time

Thanks homie, he's just really jealous of meeeee cuz I'm want he wants to beeeee but instead of just admitting it he walks around and says all kinds of really mean things because he's just a meanie, a big weenie

I Hear ya, I Hear ya, if i drop any stuff in CR anytime soon ill feed this for sure