Future Unknown

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Pros
-I liked the lyricism in it, but then again I'm not that hard to impress

-Definitely some cool lines like;
"probably'll advertise for Sprite"
"The nerd that I bullied will be a businessman tonight"

-Always cool when someone expresses themselves and brings their beliefs/perspective to the table.

Cons
-I kept comparing it constantly to Rock Bottom in my head, which kind of through off the flow for me

-I don't agree with a lot of the content, but that's just an opinion

I'll do a full song, and maybe i'll record it

[Slim Fiasco]

Basketballers are lame, probably'll advertise for Sprite
The nerd that I bullied will be a businessman tonight

My favorite lines as well, nice work. Now I can't really give you any constructive criticism because I don't write on English but I think it's very decent for someone your age.