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Scratch A Nut

Postby ilovebender.com » Jun 25th, '11, 08:44

Living at home no you don't get
no better than swinging with the
king n' I'll cum; miss come bless
this feta, a bredder, the one with
all the chedda, come we go try
cumming together, play miss
thang bitch in it for the game and
I don't give 2 bit- care not 4 da fame
I'm just winging it singing it - always
the same note - you know, I
just got to

scratch a nut

I don't care if you wanna' block man
knock man out cause' your girl wanna'
rock my boat, yeah - you better go
handle your own, an' know I don't stop that so drop
that go swap that, I spot that, don't back chat shit,
seriously I don't quit 'cause I gotta give, gotta gotta
gotta give, give it more clearly; See. - I snitch not
bitch not, am just doin' my good deeds get a
ghetto Witch or a glitch off the streets 'cause
I be rolling my weeds an' I - don't give a fuck,
just got to

scratch a nut

"Just tryin' to scratch a nut."
-ilovebender.com, 2011

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Re: Scratch A Nut

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 27th, '11, 19:52

I sure hope this was your attempt at a Based Freestyle because this shit sucked. :laughing:
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Re: Scratch A Nut

Postby ilovebender.com » Jun 27th, '11, 22:02

I wrote it about life...

I am the bredda
the one with all the chedda (cheese, marijuana)
some bitches wanna test ma' feta - knob cheese for all I care... Did that and her man's all like
'AH, YOU CUNT I'LL KNOCK YOUR BLOCK OFF, I THOUGHT YOU WAS A M8' and shit...
It's like, I don't need bitches falling in love with me if we fuck, if we fuck and she's
mad at her man who I know but never seen for years right, if we fuck and he's all like
"how could you?"
And she's all like
"I'm going to be your hood rat now, and we gonna claim benifits at the job centre together, just like couples do, plus - I'm gonna tell the whole town that I had sex with you"
, then that's what you're gonna get. lol. They get vexed at me trying to act all street, I nipped that shit in the bud, did what anyone with half a brain cell would do and dialed the police because both of them stepped outter line, fuck them, do you think I give two shits about that ghetto mentality bull shit? Fuck no! Got a bunch of texts and shit saying this that and that shit... The police was like... Because me and this girl had sex, they'd have to treat it as a domestic... Fuck that shit... I mean, I get it, but all because a woman has sex with a man, doesn't mean sh*t... I hate it when a woman has sex with a man and just expects to be in a relationship with him...

Anyway... I wrote that about something that happened way earlier in the year.
I wrote about life, I care not if you think it's shit, you're shit. You get me? This
just wrote it's self, I'm a man, who's just trying to smoke pot, and find a nice girl
who won't switch, and I'm tired of people only pretending to care when they want something, even if that thing they want is me not having sex with their girl... I know/knew the guy, then we didn't speak for like 3/4 years... Then his girl who I kiss and stuff rings me up out of the blue oneday just before christmas last year, and then I see him come round my house trying to play friend with me... For real, some fucking stupid people in the world.
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Re: Scratch A Nut

Postby classthe_king » Jun 27th, '11, 22:10

VenomBlackViper wrote:I sure hope this was your attempt at a Based Freestyle because this shit sucked. :laughing:


He writes rock music, not rap.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Scratch A Nut

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 27th, '11, 22:14

classthe_king wrote:
VenomBlackViper wrote:I sure hope this was your attempt at a Based Freestyle because this shit sucked. :laughing:


He writes rock music, not rap.


Well that makes alot more sense, I care more about the musical aspect of Rock than the lyrical aspect so I can't feedback this if it's rock.

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